Portfolio for WritingⅣ

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Student ID: 07128
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Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	Web site review	09.28.2008	8	447 words	7	1	4	0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	My favorite place	10.19.2008	6	454 words	0	0	0	0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	MR2-01: Mrs. Doubtfire	11.04.2008	5	284 words	5	0	0	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	Community Life	11.16.2008	7	351 words	0	0	0	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	Secrets of Kumamoto	11.30.2008	4	256 words	0	0	2	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	Learning with computer	12.15.2008	6	400 words	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	36	2192 words	12	1	6	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I think my best essay is "My favorite place", because the essay has a a lot of paragraph and words. Then, it incrude my mind.
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Web site review	2008.10.01	46 words	good
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ... I displayed recent coments top of sidebar.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
• ....
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	TAXI OF TERROR	2008.08.14	333	0
2-02	THE FIFTEENTH CHARACTER	2008.08.18	293	0
2-03	JENNIFER LOPEZ	2008.09.23	252	0
2-04	Mr. Putter & Tabby Take the Train	2008.10.02	303	0
2-05	OLVER & AMANDA AND THE BIG SNOW	2008.10.08	375	0
2-06	New York Cafe	2008.12.17	130	0
2-07	Tigger Comes to the Forest	2008.12.17	401	0
2-08	Ben and the Ghost	2008.12.21	333	0
2-09	Sam Runs Away	2008.12.21	275	0
2-10	Le Petit Prince	2008.12.21	65	0
2-11	Young Cam Jansen and the Pizza Shop Mystery	2008.12.22	340	0
2-12	Stories of Ponies	2008.12.22	344	0
2-13	Man-Eating Snails	2009.01.15	272	0
2-14	More Macdnalds	2009.01.28	104	0
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
---	---	Totals:	3820	1

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I tink my best book review is 2-07. I write a lot of words and detail about story.

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...I like "Web site review", because the essay has some photographs and a link.
2. ...I wrote about my family in "My favorite place" It is good essay for me, becase I introduce my family and my home town.
3. ..."Secret of Kumamoto" was not so good, because it was like a movie review.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...We had to write 15000words in fall semester. It was so hard for me.
• ...Writing essays wrer diificult.
• ...
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...We should paste more photographs, links and media.
• ...We should use some function of Blogger.
• ...
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   

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