Web site review (rewrite) (essay1)

I often watched “SESAME STREET” on the TV when I was a girl. I couldn’t understand English at that time, so I had watched dubbing into Japanese. It was very interesting! I liked SESAME STREET, so I decided to write review about the Web site.
The Web site’s name was “123 SESAME STREET beta”. The Web site had a lot of fun content. For example, there were GAMES, VIDEOS, SESAME PLAYLISTS, MUPPETS and so on!

GAMES page had many easy games. These were used easy English, so I could play some games without constraint.

VIDEOS page had various fun videos. I liked “Global Grover: Get To School”. Grover and camel appeared the video. They were interesting, and I thought they were like comic duo! And also, I liked “Preschool Musical”, because many character appeared the video and they sang a song. All of them were wonderful singer! When I watched the video, I wanted to sing a song!!

SESAME PLAYLISTS page had also many video like a VIDEOS page. But I thought that the page seemed to be useful for children’s education, because these videos title were “Ready for School”, “Fun at School” and “Learning is Fun” and so on. I watched “Fun at School”. First, many student’s picture appeared the video. Next, students played chess. They looked happy! Finally, I watched “Elmo’s Patty time”. Elmo, Zoe and Baby Bear appeared! Their conversation was enjoyable and I thought foreign country’s school seemed to be happy.

In MUPPETS page, twelve main characters were introduced. Character’s name were Abby Cadabby, Count Van Count, Oscar the Crouch, Bert, Elmo, Rosita, Big Bird, ernie, Telly Monster, Cookie Monster, Grover and Zoe. I had known all character’s appearance, but I didn’t know six character’s name. And I checked how many characters in SESAME STREET. There were 29 characters, but this number was not exact, because this figure was number of main character.

I love Elmo, so I watched his introduction. His description was friendly and cheerful monster, and his birthday was February 3! I didn’t know his birthday, so I was surprised. By the way, he is 3 years old! Then I watched some Elmo’s movie. All of them were very cute, so I got to like him more and more!!
Next, I watched Big Bird’s introduction. He was 8-foot-2-inch yellow bird! 1 foot is 30.48 centimeters, and 1 inch is 2.54 centimeters. So his height is 248.92 centimeters!! I thought he was “Big” Bird surely.
Finally, I watched Cookie Monster’s introduction. His fur color is blue, and his appearance likes Elmo. His favorite food was cookies, cookies, and more cookies!!

I like SESAME STREET’s character, so I enjoyed the Web site!!!

[123 SESAME STREET beta] http://www.sesamestreet.org/home

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